i get the feeling blenderartists.org is better suited for doing blender related work
but for some reason i feel like ive gotten good feedback here on things like conceptwork and digital painting too
sorry, im not certain if this makes any sense
sorry updates are so long apart but you know, life and surviving and what not
i think the story telling is weak. if i added appropriate background and modified the body language and facial expressions to support a specific story i think that might be better