Monsters gose blender

Artwork Focused Critiques
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Hope any one like it.:rolleyes:[ATTACH=CONFIG]232200[/ATTACH][video]www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=580943685269641&set=vb.100000620433714 &type=2&theater[/video]

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Thanks for the critic on my work I’m done with character.:smiley:

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u got the modeling aspect real good, but

  1. the mouth and cheeks area need some work. he doesnt look like the real deal
  2. the texturing should be more subtle
  3. his fingers shouldnt be that witch-like :slight_smile: his nails should be less pronounced
  4. the horns and nails should be grey not yellowgreen
  5. his eye should be green, not blue. and dont just paint a texture on it, model a cornea separate from the iris
  6. add some reflectivity to the cornea and make the specular a lot sharper. it currently doesnt look wet
  7. his forehead just above his eye should bulge out

well, that’s all for now…good luck!

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  1. his teeth should be bigger
  2. make him slightly rounder. scale his main body down a bit (z axis)
  3. the eyelids should be a lot fatter

ok, now i’m done :slight_smile:

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Very nice, I recognised this guy staight away( but from where I don’t recall…)
I wouldn’t be concerned with making him exactly like the original.

Two things jump out at me:

  • there is quite pronounced shadow detail on the body, but
    none for the ground. Giving him a ground plane to stand on
    and receive shadow detail may make this render more engaging.

  • one arm looks much longer than the other. I think this
    is just the pose - but it is worth rethinking either the
    camera angle or the position of the arms to make them
    look more balanced.

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he’s from pixar’s “monsters inc.”
here’s a picture for comparison http://static.tumblr.com/c56635b1b2d9b58590fa2baa2a165b23/utxtlzc/tGVmg9r8l/tumblr_static_monsters_inc_movie_image_pixar__2_.jpg

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I just uploaded this file to blender swap in case any one want to animate it or make it better in texture…Hope it passes.

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The blendfile is ready at blend swap site,enjoy it.