Hi all,
I’m thinking about making a movie called MONSTERS The Movie (No prizes for guessing what it’s about, then!)
here’s the basic idea:
There is a world of small hopping monsters and this one bad guy (Tark) and his asssistant (Wyforce) are trying to find a magical diamond in the hidden caves of Door in the Snowlands. Our two heroes (Bleep and Peach) are in the Snowylands on holiday. They accidentally find the diamond but Tark steals it from them at night. They follow him to his base inside a mountain and there find that he wants to use the diamond to destroy the local village! So they have a subterranean fight etc.
[Not sure about how it could end and admittedly the idea needs fleshing out a bit more, but Id like to know what people think!]
The first scene at the very start of the movie is already written out as follows:
We see a rotting proson block situated in a gorge/swamp filled with flies and huge mosquitoes. Barbed wire is coiled all around the building and smoke is errupting out of cracks on the hard ground.
We pan past some prison qindows showing various inmates in differing statess of awareness: some are lying passed out on the floors of their cells while others are awake and raving, rattling at the bars of their cages.
Then we suddenly come to a cell which is empty: A slimy floor tile has been removed, revealing a dark creepy tunnel.
Black
Suddenly a searchlight blasts into life on the prison rooftop. Wailing sirens are heard as prison cars errupt from the rotting garage with a billow of dust.
A flashing sign on the wall above the prison door blares out - “ESCAPE! - ESCAPE!”
We cut to a dark shadow (Tark) slipping effortlessly across thee roof of a small extension.
A sleeping guard jolts into a sudden wakefulness at the sounds. He turns as a black shadow falls across him. A knife flashes in the darkness and he falls down, dead (Note :- don’t want it gory, just as a ‘thriller’ start).
A searchlight flashes over the dead guard as Tark vaults the roof and lands in an incredibly small sleek flying craft which was hovering below, waiting for him. It’s driver is Tark’s henchman, Wyforce.
They speed off into the night, leaving the prison in a state of total panic.
So… there it is. I always loved movies that started off with a bang but I would love some feedback as to whether anyone think this could get them on the edge of heir seats if they watched it. Any ideas, even crazy ones, and any C&C would be very much appreciated!
Ta
@lex
PS i know this is a huge task but ijust want to try it lol…