Hey, this is my first thread! I wanted to show you guys this scene I made. It took 3 or so hours to render. Thanks to Andrew Price for the grass essentials demo particle system. The rest is my work and I used seven different particle systems for the grass. Hope you like it. All feedback welcome.
Love the image but the only critique I have is the roof doesn’t fit, I don’t know exactly what is wrong with it. But maybe change the color of it of rotate it 90 degrees.
or make the roof like these
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I agree with Krayonn about the roof. It does seem a little out of place on that cottage. Sort of like it’s brand new and hasn’t experienced any weathering yet, which if that’s what you’re going for it kind of works.
To really sell this scene, I would add some junk around the house, like a wooden water bucket, a bench, some tools. Things that make the cottage look lived in. But it’s a great start overall, and the grass looks very believable. I look forward to seeing you post more stuff!
Thanks for the advice! The reason the roof is orientated that way is because the texture I used WoodPlanksBare0158_1 from CGTextures. There was a lot of colour variations at the bottom, so it would be very noticeable that it was tiled.