Mr Know All - Scene from a strory

This was an assignment for english lesson - about the story “Mr Know All” by William S. Maugham.
Link to the story - http://www.afn.co.kr/archives/readings/knowall.htm

Blender3d+GIMP for the text

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Comments are welcome

The comb teeth are very thin IMO. Don’t you think it’s better to make them a bit thicker? (thus more visible)