My Blender Anim Challenge #2 WIP

Artwork Works in Progress
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Here’s my WIP thread for the Second Blender Animation Challenge.

Here’s my blocking pass with some timing.

Feel free to criticize, thanks in advance for the comments.

EDIT:
Ok, I know my first video was a little raw, so here’s my second pass in vimeo and here it is on youtube. It’s still not smooth animation, just most of my blocking and timing.

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its look good
but its hard to understand cause
there are not enough Frame per seconds.

so its also hard to give an opinion