my car

i made this car a while back but it wasent very good ive made some ajustment and i am pleased with it now

crits would be nice not much more i can say so there

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Not bad, better than I could do. Your edges seem a little soft to me for some reason, especially around the nose. Some good geometry though.

The front part of the car, looks like someone went at it with a hammer, or keyed it or something.

But putting my hand over the front part and just looking at the back, it looks perfect.

Nice use of ramp shaders too. :wink:

Edit: Is the car floating? I don’t see any shadows? Also road texture looks stretched.