This is a render of a drafting pencil I have. Comments and Criticism?
nice, but change the lighting from a spot, its to annoying for me, change it to a shadow only, then dup it, and make it a lamp
very cool. could use a shadow though.
Shouldn’t it roll over so that it is resting on it’s clip? I agree about the lighting, maybe you should hit it with multiple softer lights, or maybe some radiosity?
Very nice model though. I’d like to see the pointy end more, looks like you’ve got some interesting texture going on there.