My first 2 animations (as first and second episode) for my first series

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I have been using Blender for under a day and made 2 animations in grease pencil for my series:


(The series is simply a blue fluid ball emerging from a water leak (episode 1) and learning how to jump across platform (episode 2). The series is still ongoing, and I decided to delay episode 3 for feedbacks)

I’m looking feedbacks on:

  • Workflow optimization (Can I make my workflow smoother and less convoluted?)
  • Physic (Is the physic right?)
  • Animation (Is there any part that you think could be improved?)

(My experience in Blender is under a day, so I hope the feedbacks are not too overwhelming to my skill)

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First day on Blender 3D software! Same animation style can be done with another software Krita, … maybe is more easy with Blender 3D. Good work.