My first ArchiViz required Focused Critiques!

My first ArchViz. Required focused critiques. All the best!

PS. Not all models was modeling by me. Some downloaded.

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I think I’d like it more if the lighting was brighter. Not necessarily open the curtains but just adjust the exposure maybe.

I think the hexagon pattern would look better if it wasn’t more even instead of sort of stretched horizontally.

What are you using as the light source? sun lamp? hdri? sky texture?

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Hi! actually i am ussing HDRI combimed with AO. Plus 2 projectors with portal in front. Thank’s for remark!!!

I like the colors, they seem harmonious.

What I would add though, is that the sofa is lacking the rectangular corners like the rest of furniture in the room (because of the big pillows).

Or you could try to reduce rectangular-ness of other objects with more rounded corners to balance it out (wall shelves, or the table).

And more light would probably make for a better composition.

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it looks like your plant in the upper right shelf is floating.

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Thanks. I will try to use your advice on next ARHIVIZ

I’d look to jazz-up the lighting a little bit. Let’s start by doing something with those three lamps that are above the sofa. How about another interesting lamp on the left side? Goose the lighting up a little bit under that table … no “dark spots.” And, well, how about adding a little color to the lights? Open those curtains wider if you have to.

Anytime the human eye regards a scene, it is naturally drawn first to the brightest and most-contrasty part of the scene. From there, it wants to trace a circular loop path from one bright area to the next, winding up wherever it started.

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Beautiful. In the bottom left there is a small part of the ground that looks like it has a different texture. Or is that intentional?

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I think a little bit of post processing can make your image vibe a little bit

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Yeah. Looks much better. More photorealistic!!!

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Maybe adding some dust in the air will help too, I forgot to add that :thinking:

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