my first blender project

Artwork Works in Progress
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Hi

I started using Blender 2.67b 2 weeks ago.
Thanks to the wonderful Tutorials online - i managed to create my own objects

still learning , so any critique or help would be appreciated

i have added the blend file

cheers

bathroom.jpg1920×1080 341 KB

[ATTACH]
246158[/ATTACH] <----- Blend File

Attachments

vanity.blend (986 KB)

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Definitely not too bad on the materials, particularly the tile and granite. Lighting needs work though. I haven’t seen a sink that square in a long time either, so that may be a good thing to improve upon later. In addition, is that in the back supposed to be a painting, or a window?

In particular, I think you should experiment with lighting as it’s quite a crucial component in attaining a superior result, and can help you in finding what needs work and improving on it.

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Thanks for the advice . I will definatly learn more about lighting

lol i put that thing in the back because i had trouble when i put a glass pane in the window frame, again probably due to lighting

Cheers

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played around with lighting -

included glass in window

and made an underslung basin

more work needed lol

vanity_3.jpg1920×1080 519 KB

Cheers

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Welcome to forum! :slight_smile:

Good start on the scene, the tiles and overall look are nice. Here are a few things you can improve:

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1: The big water blob of death? I have no idea what that is. Maybe a few more samples can help or move that somewhere where it can be seen better.
2: You seem to be having some weird reflections here. Probably because of the geometry.
3: No interest. It’s all dark. Add an exterior image or something that can keep the eye interested.

Hope that didn’t sound too harsh, it’s meant to help and good luck!

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This looks nice, good work! I like how you managed the materials, and I think the second render looks great.
You should try to use bevel edges on the sink, it might look more natural.

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not too harsh at all :slight_smile: thanx for your input

  1. the blob of death haha is the start of the drain (work in progress)

  2. i know right ? maybe i’ll make a different glass

Cheers

  1. the window is suppose to be dark - nighttime - but i guess i can throw in something
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You could throw in stars and maybe a moon outside the window. That way people can tell that it is night.

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decided to create entire bathroom

hope you like it

Attachments

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Ehh, looks like something out of a horror game.

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cheers 4 that