this is my first major work what do you think is it any good?
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this is my first major work what do you think is it any good?
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what you think of as dark really isn’t that dark, especially in a low-light environment. as it is, work on addding a little more light to the scene, and a decent 3-point light setup will help. The main light right now is in an awkward position where the face doesn’t get enough illumination, and you definitely need at least the fill and backlights because your model isn’t very defined at the moment, it will help to illustrate your model more so we can have a better look at the modelling. a stronger light (and maybe a background) will also make your hair and eyes not seem to glow as much.
As far as modelling goes, I can’t really tell, but you might need to work on the creases at the edges of the eyes and the pinches at the sides of the lips. also, the distance between the eyes looks a little wide.
Please change your title and provide more clear pictures of your project or I’ll be forced to lock this thread.
I actually like this image. Its a little spooky, with the face peering out of the darkness, and the almost-glowing eyes. Yes the facial structure could be improved; as talion said, the eyes seem a little far apart. Without a more widely lit view, its a little hard to comment on the model.
I think with just a little tweaking of the light, you could get a really unsettling feel to this (I mean this in a good way). Imagine you heard a noise outside, and peeked through your curtains, to see this face up against the window. It would freak me out for sure. Maybe add a slight bit of backlighting to bring out the silouette, as if he was lit by a distant streetlamp.
Can I make a suggestion for something to try please. Try moving in the camera, and adjust to give a wide angle. Kind of like an extreme close-up, to really emphasise the perspective. Think about what I said earlier, about finding this face pressed up against your window. How about putting a glass pane in front of him, with some raindrops on. I’ve no idea how you’d actually do this, but I’m just throwing out ideas.
If you had something completely different in mind for this image, then go with what you feel. Like I said, I’m just brainstorming here
You still have not explained what it is you are trying to do? besides being a smart ass, its not smart to make your intro here and bash the mods. What he was saying is this.
Change your post title to something that explains what you are modeling. (A Picture) is not a good title and does not explain what you are making.
This is Focused Critique not WIP, We cant critique what we cant see. A lighted, better angle on that model would help us to see what problems you have in your model. From that shot I can see alot, but im not sure if its bad lighting or bad modeling.
Listen to the mods here, they are not bad, they are only doing their jobs to make this a good forum.
here is a clearer shot as the moderators seem to want to lock any work which the lighting is artistic and dark
Okay.
Please read the guideline, it’s the first Sticky in the focused forum.
https://blenderartists.org/forum/viewtopic.php?t=47262
The rules:
- Serious work
Please be sure that any work your posting here is of a serious nature, feature tests or projects you’ve spend little time on don’t belong here.Remember this is the focused critique forum; people are expecting high serious work for them to give serious feedback on.
- Points of focus
If your posting here it means you are looking for criticism on your work, it helps if you already point out some things you’re questioning yourself. Make sure to include any information you can, such as blueprints, wireframe images, multiple renders, your ideas, concepts, experience, goals, inspiration, and timeline.
If you need explications why I moved this to WIP, PM a mod.
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