My First Love

Hello!

I saw the danbo’s model lately and I kinda fell in love. So of course I had to make one of my own!
I have two results and I just can’t decide which one is better. Also I want to hear what is your opinion overall about the works and how it can be improved.

So this is the first try:


And here is the second one:
It also a little bit more saturated… tell me if it was a bad idea


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I dont know if its just me but I focus mainly on the sun when I look at this image. The parts of the image that actually tell the story seem to go under.

Well I realized that the sun may get some attantion but I hoped it won’t make it worse.
Thank you for the advice, I hope other people will also comment here :slight_smile:

This is adorable!

Thanks! which one is better in your opinion?

Cute! Really adorable

Congratulations on a terrific run in every sense

I would try to use a photography trick on this - focus stacking, the protagonists both in focus, rest very blurry