I was sitting in school one day and i got an idea for a scene. I pictured a broken down house with a drunk sitting in the stairs trying to stand up. This was the result after 2 hours of Blending. By the way this pic was rendered without Motion blur so bare with me!
Really nice! I like the lighting especially. The lamp itself is some what lacking but hey, who cares?
On my monitor, it came out VEEEEEERY dark, hard to see much.
maybe this was intended, or maybe i just need to adjust monitor settings.
It is dark.
That’s always useful to have a tool handy to adjust the gamma when viewing othe peoples work.
Otherwise it is, as said, strong by its athmosphere. Excellent debut. The perso… I mean ‘character’, is either quite drunk or a bit on tetanos.
try to add some shadows, and the lightbulp is yellow, but light itself inthe room, looks very white…
also you could try to move the camera a bit… to create mood mood to the picture…try a different angles…
The lightbulp is yellow because I was trying to create the illusion of it emitting light. Butt it did not work.
Maybe try turning on OSA and selecting 16. seems to be a few rough edges. Subsurf or set smoothe on a couple of things might also improve (The light looks kind of hard. Maybe it’s just me). Pretty good though
The mood is very good, but I’d like to see it a little bit brighter - not much, though. They’re right about the lightbulb, but overall, it’s nicely done.
Thanks for c&c guys i’m having some minor sett backs though my teacher has erased our harddrives including my texture files. Now i have to find them all again.