My first work named "stop the parole"

My first work in Blender.
http://dilema.iespana.es/dilema/images/terreny3.jpg

comments and tips please

is that strawberry jell-o? http://members.aol.com/skyf41/images/squeaksemoticon.gif

Nice first image. Why is the ground half way up the house and the pool though? And why is it transparent?

BgDM

Why is the ground half way up the house and the pool though? And why is it transparent?

Because the ground must be excavated to place the house. This image will be used in a real proposal and i want to explicit it

Because the ground must be excavated to place the house. This image will be used in a real proposal and i want to explicit it

Oh, OK. That makes sense then.

BgDM

ya, that totally makes sense now. I think for a proposal its perfect, but i dont really like the way its tilting. Other than that its good!!!

It is in the mountain
the ground is done from topographical survey, vertex by vertex, face by face, and finally smooth, i like it very much.

Ok, it looks great for a proposal, but (im sorry if this seems somewhat annoying and too critical) I dont think you should show the house and the pool as being perpandicular (or slightly so) to the mountain slope (standing wise), not very good for living standards. I dunno, it looks like you did try and set it out, but it still looks like I’d be cheated on a game of snooker. Sorry if its a bit picky and very critical. A cool proposal none-the-less.

don´t worry. Thanks very much