My gloomy cave tree

rendered in yafray.

http://people.freenet.de/greg_p1/nearly.jpg

This is the first project I got so far in…just never could be bothered to go any further. Its not finished yet, I’ve still got to add some details, sort out the materials…and for a few things I might still need help T_T (I’ll be so happy when I know everything I need to know about blender)

Can I ask questions here or would that be considdered rude?

C&C most welcome :slight_smile:

sry but i can’t see the picture.

Everything is a little too smooth. How much subsurf have you used? The boulder especially seems too smooth, if it were just sat there in the water it could not have been eroded that much. Still its looking promising. You should also experiment with the lighting, try and get lights under things pointing sharply up to give it a more dramatic edge.