My second 3D project: Elegant Lipstick and Cosmetics Showcase

Hello everyone! This is my second 3D modeling project in Blender. I modeled a lipstick and cosmetic products with metallic and glass textures using Cycles. After the feedback on my last post, I kept the render samples lower to match my computer’s capabilities. I would love to get your feedback and thoughts on this!`

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great work !
the materials and the lighting are amazing !

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Thank you so much!

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Could you add a wireframe of this project?

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Sure! Here is the wireframe of the project. Let me know what you think!

seem very simple and looks good even with grain

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The font sucks … but whatever.

And so too does its typographic layout. Totally interrupts / severs the rectangular prismatic energy … cuts it down right at the knees.

Branding is not a hot iron to sear the flesh.

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nice work, light awesome

There’s better way to put it where it’s more constructive. “Font choice is hard to read and doesn’t mesh well withe the design” “Font placement could be better if it it’s below the glass, as to not break it’s flow”

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Thank you for the feedback. I am a student and have only been learning Blender for 4-5 months. This project was a training exercise where our instructor asked us to strictly replicate the provided reference image. While I’m still learning, I believe feedback is much more encouraging when shared respectfully.

Thank you so much for the support and for explaining it so well. I’m actually a beginner with only 4-5 months of learning, and my assignment was to strictly follow the instructor’s reference. I really appreciate your polite and constructive approach!

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Thank you so much! Glad you liked the look.