my small piece of poem ..

here we gooO …

i wrote it for someone i knew who is realy arrogant :mad: …

========== Thanks god i’m not you ==========

thanks god i’m not you …
<Drums>
thanks god i’m not you
<Drums , Drums>

a lot of thanks from god i’m not
and loads of thanks from god i’m not < 110 % tempo on this sentence>

<Drums >

your house blocks are made of skulls
<Drums>
your red short hands are made of salts
<Drums>
your butt is small your mouth is large
<Drums , Drums … tot … Drums Drums>

we can never tolorate you shadow
your presence is a sin your head is hollow

thanks god i’m not you
<Drums>
thanks god i’m not you
<Drums , Drums>

stear around him like if he was made , of plutunium !!
<Drums , Drums>
just show your nails and never surronder to the silly-some .
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what about making a song out of this ? , can amend this and make much better words , who can sing ?
Ejay can make awesome music .

Well, the rhythm and flow needs lots of work. You could also take out the <drums> sections. Plus, I don’t know any guys that comment on the size of each other’s butts. :confused:

peace,
-nick

a masterpiece…

would love to hear you sing.