this was for an smc me appleman and backiz did the theme was electronics and you had an hour (rendertime not included)
i would like to become a better modeler so rather than just saying its sh*t can you tell me what im doing wrong and ways in which i can improve my overall blender skills, Thanks! Fudge
It looks really good especially how plastic your textures on the buttons look.
One thing that bothers me is the fact that the pen seems to be floating.
Maybe add some reflection to the screen on the device also.
Where can I get a floating stylus like that?! hehe, just kidding. Nice render.
My only suggestions would be to bring the pen back down to earth and tile the wood on the table a little less…
grrr u evil peope must you mock my pen :x (lol nah just kidding 
) heres just a quick update fixing what u said
the image on the pda looks streched which destroys the profesional look of it. (pen still floating a tiny little bit).
and zoom in!!! looks so far away you want people to feel like they can touch it.
It’s great tho
ok ill see what i can do give me 10mins
sorry took sooooooo long to render 
Wow, that looks pretty cool.
Two things, though. One, adding indentations for arrows might look good (or it might not, I don’t know ;)). Two, where do you put the stylus when you’re not using it? That gray thing at the top? If so, you can’t really tell…
Oh, maybe shadows would help the picture; or maybe not.
Don’t get me wrong, though, it’s still cool.
Looks good, the screen looked kind of nice on the PDA, put it back or put another image on it.
Wow, that looks pretty cool.
Two things, though. One, adding indentations for arrows might look good (or it might not, I don’t know ). Two, where do you put the stylus when you’re not using it? That gray thing at the top? If so, you can’t really tell…
Oh, maybe shadows would help the picture; or maybe not.
Don’t get me wrong, though, it’s still cool.
thanks first of all ill try all the things you said… (hmmmm whats a stylus? the pen?) the black thing at the top is an arial (spelling?)
Looks good, the screen looked kind of nice on the PDA, put it back or put another image on it.
hmmm so what are you saying this screen doesnt look as good?
well i see what i can do atm as for indentations for buttons anyone got any idea’s? select only the button verts then do select swap and hide the rest and take the middle vert and use “o” to bring it down?
on the closeup image you can see sharp edges in the corners. not sure if this is what you want but i guess smooth “edges” would look better.
also maybe some holes in the case for the buttons would improve the realisem of the pda. i think bukttens normaly don’t fit 100% in the hole so you allways see a little dark area around it (in the way the display has dark edges).
maybe the material of the case can need an update too. maybe some nor texture that fakes the little pits most plastik/fake aluminium cases have. but only very less nor to give a hint to the eye that it isnt 100% flat.
i hope you understand what i try to tell you with my crappy english 