After the weekend meeting, we narrowed it down to these two alternatives that met our particular tastes. Everybody did a great job and once again we thank everyone who contributed.
So which one do you think works best for our story? For your benefit, we’ve added a
Our protagonist is a monster who’s been having problems to sleep. Medical remedies have all but failed. When he hears about “Dr. Bear’s 100% effective” sleep aid, he goes downtown, causing quite a commotion, and meeting Dr. Bear himself. Can the monster be cured? Can he foot the enormous bill?
Full script in sig links.