Need some input


(meb1617) #1

Sup fellow Blender heads

hey I’v hit a dead end :x i need some suggestions on what else i should place in this scene. can yall help? heres my url when u get there click on my new project

http://www.mattswebpage.tk

or use

http://www.mebswebsite.dyns.net

help :-? and thanx,
Matt


(meb1617) #2

heres the image
http://141.156.37.248:8080/river1.jpg


(digitalSlav) #3
  1. get rid of the halo sun it really detracts from your work

  2. background - add some far off mountains or something in the background - the real world almost never ends in a flat lined horizon unless you are out to sea or something

  3. more detail in the foreground - maybe some dead branches or leaves on the ground - maybe more rocks

  4. make sure there is enough there to make us feel like we can walk around and always find something new


(ectizen) #4

Linking to something on your D: drive just isn’t going to work…

I’ve tried looking at your site a few times recently. Every time failed, with a “Gateway Timeout… Server Unreachable” error for the www.mebswebsite.dyns.net part of the site :frowning:


(meb1617) #5

Fixed it


(pofo) #6

Ho hum, lets see… yes:

  1. Bark texture to your trees

  2. The grass looks to be of uniform height and ends in a too straight line.
    add some clumps of it on the sand (snad?)

  3. Mud

  4. Algae and/or fish

  5. Perhaps a steeper bank, this entire land would flood over if it rained a little.

  6. Dead leaves under the tree.

  7. Branches and stuff washed up by the water.

There, that should keep you occupied for awhile :wink:

Oh, nice scene by the way

  1. pofo

(YAYA) #7

A NICE LOOKING BIKINI GIRL!!!
(you asked what to add!)


(Pooba) #8

Hey! that’s pretty good! I think that you need to add in a backround, make a more realistic looking sun, and add some more stuff to the forground (basically everything that tmtechy said).

A NICE LOOKING BIKINI GIRL!!!
(you asked what to add!)

lol

Pooba


(Bapsis) #9

A NICE LOOKING BIKINI GIRL!!!

Heck, why not make it two? Then you can get into the animation stuff in Blender! :wink:

Matt

Blend on, and blend well!!!


(meb1617) #10

now if one of u would send me a blend file with a girl ill do it. cuz i cant model people worth shit!!! if u want send here [email protected]