New OpenCanvas...4 shades rough

[I had removed pictures that I did not like, but now repleced them, because I did not what to make the critique of them look off mark…I apologize for messing up this sketchbook…I guess, no matter what, I will always suck at forums…

I will eventually place the images back in their original places, but for now, I will put them here]

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[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

Another rough, used about 4 colors with a reference image from a photoshop tutorial. I like the character in this girl’s face and tried to capture it.

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5876/4r2alrg1kc8.th.jpg

Will upload the video of the event file running, soon

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

here is the link to the event file running for the 2nd image

I am trying different codecs because waiting to upload these, suck.

This is good drawing but if you want some criticism to help you improve your craft:

yes, the head has nice colouring, but is misshapen. The forehead should recede in a bit above the brow then slope outwards. Also your picture the cheek is too prominent (looks odd), and her right cheek bone/jaw looks very tiny compared to mouth. The eyes aren’t lining up and don’t look ideal (also maybe this is intended :wink: Her mouth is joined to her nose! And her nose looks a bit like a trunk.

Get some art books about Symmetry and overall forms.
search google scribd and search there “Lear how to draw” or “dinamics of human figures”
or Andrew Loomis.

I general you must correct the scull shape the mouth the nose all it is to much to be modified so better learn and remake it.

You have the talent you must enhance it.

Get a sketch book an draw if your tablet it is no help.

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

Here is the link to the flv of the event file running.

Check my sketchbook tread , I “Suck” you don`t :smiley:

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

[removed also] removing all the old stuff and doing new stuff from reference images.

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

Removed image for new work…

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

removed old image that sucked… making room for new work

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

Removed slide show of images that sucked, also

Shape looks good now. Waiting to you finish the skin tones.

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

[removed images]

I am going to try new stuff, with reference images…after a while, if I get loose, I will try a freestyle again…without weasel teeth.

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

[removed, due to frustration] I just did not like it

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

[removed, due to frustration] I just did not like it

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

[removed, due to frustration] I just did not like it

I would say that everything about her head looks fine except her mouth and part of her nose. I would consider making her lips a tad smaller and make her teeth smaller. She looks like a human bunny now. I would also try those shapes without details, just do some simple blocks of colors until you nail it.

Put her an couple of “Bunny Ears” and will be next “Playboy” mascot :))

One tip for you draw a triangle from the eyes corners down to the chin it must bee with all lines equal …then you will see that head it is proportional.

:wink: Keep sketching but try to learn the forms than using reference for all the work , references are good but for the final detail that you can`t imagine it in forms like skin texture color wrinkles and overall form.

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

True, I should have used reference images, but I wanted to try and freestyle a convincing head. She does look like a weasel-bunny-from-da-underworld.

I think that if I can’t fix this today, I am going to work on something else.

Edit: I will leave these…i am already weary of editing this thread

[Note: comments Genjix Namarul7 and Tef, are about pictures I have taken down…So their critiques were right on the mark, and do not reflect the art that you see in this thread. I apologize for removing the pictures…I was just too depressed, looking at them myself… I apologize]

[removed, due to frustration] I just did not like it