New World

Hi guys! :smiley:
It’s 1 am in the morning so I am just going to post what I’ve got so far:



Some spaceships flying over a planet
What do you think? :slight_smile:

It looks cool but I kind of don’t get the idea

Thank you! The idea right now is a space ship battle in the atmosphere of a new planet.
Here’s the current progress:


Oh yeah now I get it you’re kinda in the space ship and you’re getting ready for the battle :smiley:

I don’t really know but there is something bothering me that I can’t quite lay my finger on
(btw the mountains are awesome!)

It is actually very hard to figure out what is going on here.

It looks great, but it has one big problem and I believe it’s that is is hard to figure out what’s happening. It’s hard to understand that we are on or behind the middle spaceship. It may be the DOF or just the angle and placement of camera, or it may be that the design of the spaceship is so original we don’t automatically see what it is.

I would suggest to get some more distance from the camera to the ship, or try another composition.The textures looks awesome and I like the design. It’s just hard to separate the middle spaceship from the background and understand what’s happening.

But if you fix that, this will be great!