Hi, this is my first posted (and finished) work in Blender. I am going for emotional impact over modelling “wow” factor, that’s why this image is simple. I am feeling alone lately, so I decided to translate it into an image. C&C welcome, but consider this image final (i will take note of comments for future projects)
it might help to crop the image so that the horizon line is dividing the space less into equal halves. if you want a point of reference, the Golden Rule says divisions of 65% are most pleasing to the eye. i’d crop the image so that the sky makes up 65% of the total image height, thus reinforcing the lonliness aspect with an expanse of empty sky.
Very nice, I like the message. I don’t see anything too n00bish about the modelling. Not all that sure why you used yafray to render this since no GI is really noticeable.
A very good start, certainly a lot better than my initial projects.
Edit: Oh and plantperson and chutney, if you’re going to post it’d be polite to actually comment the artwork rather wasting your time writing about someone’s stupid post.
