This is my first proper character that i have ever made in Blender. It still needs a lot of tweeking so please give a lot of critique.
You can see the images here
Back - http://www.flickr.com/photos/cmd123/5026104619/
First of all, you should maybe try more relaxed pose, also - arm are bit… Distrubung. Can you post wirefeame?
And head, depends what you want it to look - as a regular human it looks no good.
Could you be more specific on how to improve the head. Yes it is meant to be human.
So I’ve highlighted most disturbing parts IMO
On overpainted image I’ve attached human head (Although it’s female, it’ll help)
So, let’s begin:
Whole body is just blockish (neck, limbs)
front torso is pretty flat IMO
Human head is much more like a circle
Neck is strangely attached to body
But… Seriously, good start. Keep going!
Attachments
The neck and head don’t really “flow” together, I think.
Extend the arms up and away from the side. It’ll be a drag once you try to rig it. Also, try to search on the web for ‘edge loops’. You’ll need nice flowing edge loops when you animate it.
Thanks for all the the critique. I have not used all your critique but i do intend you. This is my next update.
Head - http://www.flickr.com/photos/cmd123/5030006823/
Front - http://www.flickr.com/photos/cmd123/5030004985/
Right - http://www.flickr.com/photos/cmd123/5030622046/
Back - http://www.flickr.com/photos/cmd123/5030620888/
The arms still need work i know.
First of all it looks like he has no shoulders. Second of all his arms look like they’re kinda bent outwards. Look at this picture for reference.
The ears in the last pic were rubbish so i have deleted them but does anyone know a good tutorial on how to model a ear.
p.s Thanks for all the critique it’s been really helpful
I’ve got a queston.
Do you think he should be wearing a balaclava or not. Yes i know it is not fully done but indont want to go into loads of detail on the face and then want to change it so he has a balaclava.
IMO balaclava should be wrapped around neck… But maybe my mind is too Anime-tuned 
Anyways, imagine, this cool move when he instantly put it on AND slash his enemies ; )
BTW, great work on remodelling - far better now : )
