My first shot at a serious piece. 10 minute render time with 8x AO and 45886 faces with subsurf. Any crits and suggestions are welcome.
Why make a new thread? Anyway, same crits about pose as before. I also think this picture would do well with some depth of field
Sorry. If a mod can delete this, I’ll post in the other.
the lines on the paper are pixellated, so id probably doddle on an actual bit of paper and scan it
also render with something like indigo (google indigo renderer, or indigorenderer.com)
i like the composition and his pose