No Inspiration

My first shot at a serious piece. 10 minute render time with 8x AO and 45886 faces with subsurf. Any crits and suggestions are welcome.

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Why make a new thread? Anyway, same crits about pose as before. I also think this picture would do well with some depth of field

Sorry. If a mod can delete this, I’ll post in the other.

the lines on the paper are pixellated, so id probably doddle on an actual bit of paper and scan it :slight_smile:

also render with something like indigo (google indigo renderer, or indigorenderer.com)
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i like the composition and his pose :slight_smile:
well done :slight_smile: