This is maybe still WIP, I feel something is missing so please if someone can help to get some inspiration.
Posting in the “Focused Critique” forum would be the place for getting such feedback. For now, tho, perhaps you could begin by telling us what its supposed to be?
Oh, sorry, maybe moderators could move it there?
Well, kind old, sunked, nuclear submarine, and crew waitng for some kind of help which isn’t coming after couple of months, years … Do not use nuclear power for war …
Moved the thread.
BgDM
To my way of thinking … the lighting and materials are very nice, but what is the subject? What is my eye supposed to focus on? Where is the story that you wish to tell?
I agree, there seems to be alot of foreground before you get to your subject matter.
The snow texture also seams to be really smooth and regular.
it definitely makes it an interesting piece. but yes maybe more definition would help the viewer to understand what it actually is.
just a suggestion of what would make the snow less even and regular - add some dark-colored rocks, half-buried under the snow. and dirtier snow.
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The scene is generally too feature-less, and the textures need some work.
Bumpmap the snow, and maybe add some falling snowflakes.
I agree with Zero Kid, you should move the nuclear sub closer and add some texture to the sub.