Looking for a little feedback. I am trying to improve my skills and welcome all critique.
A high res version can be seen here: http://www.stormraynes.net/img/baby.png
I really think the rocket shouldn’t hide the face of the woman in the doorway. Was this done on purpose?
The image is undersaturated and lacking in contrast.
The apparent focus point is the mobile over the crib, which doesn’t make sense.
The woman’s face is hidden. (you don’t have to model and render her; you can just use an alpha masked photo as long as the lighting is a close match)
Put an edge split modifier on the crib.
The wood texture on the mobile needs work. You’ll have to uv unwrap it and use an image texture.
Is that hair particles on the giraffe? Whatever it is, tone it down a little, and it’ll be golden.
Try giving the towel the same texture or hair as the giraffe, because it looks too flat right now.
The pillows on the shelf don’t look natural.
The ceiling is too dark.
Also, for calling the image baby.png, there is a distinct lack of baby in this image.
Overall, I think you did a good job with the modeling.
I especially like the books.