Observation Deck

I’d really appreciate any comments and criticisms you might have!
http://i.imgur.com/LVtxLdU.jpg (I’ll add the actual picture to this post once my Internet stops freaking out)

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Update:



Still hoping for some sort of criticism!

I can’t really tell what’s going on here. What’s the story.

Also to help out the image maybe add a bit of orange lighting. Currently there’s to much blue.