Office interior made for a commpetition of renovation of an old industrial building. Rendered with YafaRay.
(Noise is because of pathtracing and sort deadline - should re-rendered with PM )
Excellent modeling and rendering. I love the entire setup, it looks quite realistic.
But a few points to critique:
- Point of view is not very interesting, makes it look too normal. Perhaps a render with camera on top of one of the girders looking downwards?
- No subject in scene. Would be good if you could make a chair, lamp, desk, pen or anything else the subject with the rest of the scene in the background.
- DOF would be kick-ass
Just my suggestions.
Thanks! Your suggestions definitally worth I try…