Office

Artwork Finished Projects
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Here my first finished scene in blender:

I worked a bit on the scene, so here is the new version:

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Please click to see the high res version :wink:

The Old Version:

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Hope you enjoy.

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Great modeling! Don’t forget to work on the lighting, I think it would improve the final result by a lot.

3

This is nice! Good materials/textures here. One thing that caught my eye, like Andreu mentioned, is the light. The lamp is not on but light seems to be coming from where the lamp is.

4

Placement of objects seems a little off to me, meaning that the glass and cup seem to be in “dangerous” areas, I know its silly, but hey. Also I agree on the lighting topic, and if the lamp is supposed to be providing the light to the scene, I would try to fake the illumination of the lamp by applying an emit surface to the bulb, possibly an area light with a splash of color from the monitor to add its illumination effect. Materials need a little work, but hey, this is your first scene, and you’ve done a great job with it, all of the other stuff will come in time.

PS. The poster about programming has an error “insanetiy” I’m sure should be “insanity”

5

Thanks for the quick replies :slight_smile:

@MikeImken

My problem with the lamp is that I used a spotlight, so it focused only the table and with a pointlight it didn’t look realistic to me.

@ajm

I’m gonna trie to make the monitor glow a bit and fix that with the poster, thanks.

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Wow, that’s a lot better than my first scenes :slight_smile:
This might be a bit of a stretch, but maybe try putting an ever so slight reflection on the table, with a high frensel and lower gloss? Real desks always reflect the scene/light to some degree (else we wouldn’t be able to see them), especially a white one like this :slight_smile:

Oh, and any chance the picture of the grass originates in some was from a tutorial by BlenderGuru? :wink:
Might want to add some sort of glare or glass-covering sort of look, more or less looks like cardboard atm

But again, well done!

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Thanks :slight_smile:

Actually there is a little reflection, but thanks for the tipp.

Yes^^

8

i think you downloaded the models and made just the materials and the light. that’s the easiest way but not the most honest.

9

… use cycles…

10

Great first scene!! Try to use Cycles.

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Quick anwere: no.

Thanks, I’ll may use it for my next scenes.

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a: what the hell is an “anwer”?
b: i know you downloaded them. don’t deny it.
c: modeling normally takes a lot of time and work. so a big part of this render is not made by you.

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I’m not denying anything. Why the F**k do you think that I downloaded the models???