oldtimer

Hi!
This is my first car. I am building it for a german 3d-contest.
I am not satisfied with the lamps yet and i need to make some details and the interior.
But i think i am getting there…
I hope u guys like it :slight_smile:
http://towitoki.pointclark.net/henrik/holswolce5.jpg
any comments are appreciated :slight_smile:

cya henrik

Really good work. I think those windshield wipers could be a bit more detailed, though.

Does it base on a real car model or did you just “render your imagination”?

ePlastik: damnit, you beat me to it. i wanted to be first poster… :wink:

anyway, kaktus, good job! the windshields need some work, they dont look too glassy, same thing applies to the headlights. but otherwise, not bad!

That looks pretty schnazzy man!!! If its an original design then wow, great design on your part, i love it!!! :wink:

Matt

Blend on, and blend well!!!

thanks, its my own design inspired by rolls royce and dagobert duck :slight_smile:
updates:
http://towitoki.pointclark.net/henrik/holswolce7.jpg
http://towitoki.pointclark.net/henrik/holswolce7_hinten.jpg
cya henrik

here is another update:
http://towitoki.pointclark.net/henrik/holswolce8.jpg
cya henrik

anybody?

rockin as always dude, and your first car?? brilliant!

Looks great man!

A few points though:

  1. The area around the windows is really lacking some depth. You can tell that the windows a re just placed inside a flat plane. Put some trim around them to make them look more natural.

  2. The connection between the roof and the A Pillar, (if you do not know what that is, it is the where the roof starts to slop down towards the hood), needs to be defined more. Just having it abruptly turn down does not look right IMO. Check out some older car images in a Google search and you will see what I mean about that.

  3. The side mirrors should be seperate items and not just extruded from the body. Make them look like they are connected some how.

BgDM

ups, havent seen you guys have replied!
thank you very much!

Bgdm: now that is a helpful post :))

cya henrik

Nice renders. Are you using Yafray?

nope, why do you think it’s yafray?

No? Well is i POV-Ray? The last three renders do not look like scanline renders. Nice job!

no, its blender :slight_smile:
thanks.

cya henrik