On My Way

This is something I recently completed. I am definitely looking for critiques and advice. Thanks.

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The concept is fairly unique compared to what I’ve seen in this forum, so I can give you that.

A couple of pointers that you can take into account that would significantly improve the image.

-The burnout from the sun should be reduced a bit or made a bit softer, I don’t think in this case it needs to completely disappear though.
-The clouds, you might want to try to soften the edges a bit (either by way of the layer-weight node or a new technique that uses volume textures).

Lovely artwork here.
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