Hi all, this is my entry for the peugeot contest
I’m hoping for some good tips and crits. If i’ve got the time I’ll show a wire and a high res backside. (I’ve got to work at the backside but take a sneakpreview here )
I REALLLLY think that you should made headlights (i mean like real shiny looking headlights that makes the viewer go: coooool)
I agree with xwarrior. Change the green. Experiment with different colors to see which one goes better with that yellow.
increase the blurrines of the car’s shadow. (i forget official terms)
And the new image.
-better headlights, but can be even better, and have to do the other light.
-I forgot to turn the anglemap texture on, next time better.
-green is away (hey) but say if you don’t like he blue. Gray is so dead.
very nice overall… Do you have OSA on 16? Or at all? The image, especiall around the hubcaps, is looking kind of jaggy-jaggedy. Also, the light looks a little too bright, and is making the hood look completely white in some spots…
I agree with pretty much everything zachogden said (jagged-looking, bright light, and different angles).
Hmm, can’t tell that there are front or side windows. The blue ground looks good, as do the seats. The front of the car looks a bit sharp though and not smooth like the rest of the model; it’s more noticeable in the shadow (see where it curves inwards?) Might want to smooth that part out a bit or something.
Oh yes, I think the tires are too dark; they appear to be the exact shade of black as the shadow. Probably in too much shadow or the Ref is too low.
hey, new angle
-highdetailed wheels (Burt.S (btw, your wheels are not very special, not does your car have extreme much details. Or are you pointing at all the text you wrote next to it?)) but still thx for minding it.
-Not yet perfect windows. I’ve redone the strip around it. (colour is going to change). I’ve to spilt them indeed, the doors can’t open now
-the front thingy is on my todo list, together with the interior.
And sory, the previous render had only osa 5. Is’t 16 now. [small update]