Opening Shot in High End Sci-Fi Comedy

Looking for a fresh pair of eyes from a reasonably experienced artist on the opening shot in our sci-fi comedy YOU EAT OTHER ANIMALS? (starring Evanna Lynch), especially after consultant Safiya Gili gave some feedback.

You can see the shot here here:

You can see a preview of the film here:

Everyone (including very experienced artists) has been volunteering and any profits from the film will go to charity. The problem is that all other shots were done in Nuke, not Blender.

PETA US will be helping us to promote it alongside many others.