this is my first blender project. named the ostriod project. i’ve been working on it for quiet some time and its nearly done. apart for the first shot which is quiet crappy.
here is the link to the short movie : http://www.vimeo.com/14650784
I WANT CRITIQUE ON:
- the compositing
- the sequencing
- the sound track: should there be sound of the robot
- the first shot: what to do with it
you can allways comment on the modeling , texturing, animation but i will proberly not change a lot to that. because i’m going on holiday soon and after wards to school and want the project fininshed by then cause i have no time then.
here are some stils