Hey there, well I’m glad you found my piece of information helpful. As for this latest render, I find it a lot more appealing than the previous ones. However, being the big Blizzard fan that I am, I’ll have to admit that this character is still a bit further from it. You used that turtle shell pattern on her clothing and that doesn’t bode well with her theme, which is that of a pirate or captain. That pattern should be used with futuristic stuff. (and in all honesty, it doesn’t look great)
Keep your materials simple and don’t add too many details or give it a texture. The Overwatch characters are stylized and cartoonish. If you have a look at them, you’ll notice that the materials have many colors but all of them are plain. Some have materials that are metallic or shiny like leather, but that’s all.
Lastly, I think she looked best with purple hair and purple clothing. Also, her eyebrows are a bit too thick, if you contrast them with other female characters from overwatch. Almost all of what I said is just my opinion and I could be wrong, so don’t quote me on anything xD
edit: what I meant is that you shouldn’t make her clothing look realistic, it’s a cartoonish stylized character afterall.