particle hair+head

HI, this is my first post in a few years. I just started using blender again and this is my first project. Any comments are appreciated, especially if they concern fixing the part at the top of the head (hair too far apart, will editing the mesh help? also, hair is kinky not smooth, how do i fix that?), texturing the face or making good eyes.


Although I cannot help you with the hair, the eyes can easily be made from icospheres. There are several tutorials, just search google. Also the face looks very flat.