Pepper box revolver render help needed

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#1

I was just wondering if I can actually get some help here on this forum or not. It has been a long time since I have been on posting models.

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#2

Some things to think about:

  • The trigger guard, trigger, and main part of the gun look too round.
  • The metal shader isn’t shiny enough, and needs some sharper reflections (actual reflections rather than just spec would help a lot too).
    Do you have a reference we can compare to?
#3

i wanted to keep some aspect of the gun from the reference but also try other things to see how it would be. I just can’t seem to get a decent render to decide. Cycles wont work since i have a mac.