This project is due on Monday so i need some sugestions on how to make it better.
If you’ve got the time/desire, adding any sort of shingles or other detail to the roof would add a lot to the model I think. What context are you using the model in? Will it just be a still image?
Also, I don’t know how much of a scene you’re really wanting to make, but you could also add a couple simple chairs or something else for the front porch and/or the balcony.