please critique we humans

Hi All,
I’m working on one entry and until now this is my work…what do you think?

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small light update

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what is it?

I miss the meaning of your image but its very good realization worth to be seen. :eyebrowlift2:

wow…thats very interesting.
the mood you created is great, i like the lightning / shadows casted by the ceiling very much
the electric lights at the wall shouldn´t be that bright and yellow, lower them down because the overall atmospheric light is still too bright for that (seems to be dawn or so)
some more textures shouldn´t be wrong too.
curiuos for more
[btw : http://www.eisbergstudio.com/ could use a bit more content …]