pool table

well after four days my first serious work is finished.
C&C are welcome.

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solartic, that is very, very impressive for your first serious work! I am an avid pool player myself, noting that you really should add a small chalk cube to the rim of the table. Perhaps adding some numbers and markings to the balls? The overall scene is a 3/5 stars. For a First Serious work I give it 4/5.

thanks jackj i forgot about the chalk cube, im gonna do that and set up the balls.And thanks everyone for viewing

Nice work dude. I wish had I some time to sit down and work on something like this. Only crtique is the pool table and the sticks. Little non-porportional but for your first serious work thats definatly a great job. you did excellent on the room textures and well good textures all around.

nice work :slight_smile:

I felt i did not do the title justice, initially the pool table should have been the main treat but it had the least effort well not anymore:D
i also found out what the hell AO mean and why everyone was talking about this great feature.

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Looks like the corner holes are smaller than the balls, other than that it’s a great first work.
Congrats!

Thats pretty cool for a first serious work! Congratulations.
Somehow the scene has exaggerated proportions/forms and colours. I don’t know how to put it in words, but its almost “cartoony”. I don’t think thats a bad thing. Far from it! It adds a personality to your Artwork that can’t be found in many “photo-realistic” renderings.

If you intend to continue working on this scene, i’d rather focus on its unique style than trying to create a photo-realistic rendering.

Cheers | Daten

Looking good. I like the scene because of the way the clutter is there , but not overdone. keep it up!

XrQLz :smiley:

new update to pool table #5
thanks every one for your c&C