Predator Render

Hey guys! One of my first works that I’ve put online…

I was looking to submit this for the Movie Moments Competition on, I was wondering if there was anything else to add to this? I tried my best to stay towards the original shape of the mask, but give it a soft material with more detail/imperfections so that it seemed less disturbing as some of the poster online that I’ve seen 0_0.

The biggest problem I see with it is the the area around the eyes… maybe not enough curve and is defined by the intersection at the eye when it should have its own shape … but I’m was wondering if there was a tool in sculpt mode that could help me? Also I see that the mask metal material may be a little too soft? But I’m not entirely sure and wanted to get some other people’s opinions.

Thanks for any and all comments!