pretty gay character but still

hey this is basic my first attemp to model any to come close to a person lol i guess u could say it is cartoonish but i rekon it is gay

hey juss c&c on how gay if u’s want but still eh
heh he a smeg head [square head]
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/963/boy8nl.jpg

I would say he’s pretty straight :smiley:

The head is good for a cartoon style, but the body doesn’t match the head. I would probably keep the head and start the body over :smiley:

He’s too cube like. I’d give him more form, study a human body and see if its really that cubular (he he made a word). Although your not going for a realisitc approach I think studying a human form would help with creating a cartoony humanoid character. And I think you may want to experiment with toon shaders if your going for a cartoony style.

gay=happy?

He looks like a homo

Enriq766, I think in this sense he means he is homosexual…

Actually even for a beginners work its not that bad. The head actual has its own style that is pleasing to look at. The arms are prety good but remake the body and legs, they look like he got pancaked…

Mainly focus on fixing the shoulders, give his waist some taper, and make sure his legs are more anatomically correct (facing forward).

haha, we americans are soo weird… (there’s another word you can’t go by the dictionary definition of, it doesn’t mean demonic any more… just odd.)

That’s actually a really good early model. I didn’t even attempt hands till I had been doing blender for a long time.

keep it up!

Actually I think he means GAY - not homo, happy or gaily, but “sort of stupid like”. Something not in the Webster Dictionary either.

Anyhow it actually shows that meshing knowledge is exercised. Remember Gumby? That was GAY, and successful.

Oh yeah, one more thing, the STEELERS RULE!

oh, great… my brothers have been debating this for ages and all i could do was get on the forum… now the game finished and you’re doing it…

ah, well. I suppose I’ll have to live with it… what was it? 9-14? i wasn’t paying attention.

also, i think ‘gay’ in this context is a good blend of all of the definitions posted so far… and i agree about gumby.

edit: whoa… I didn’t even notice your avitar till you said that…

Who are they??? lol jk
Not bad for a first body (i have yet to atempt one)

American footbol team, They just beat the seahawks in the 40’th superbowl (season ending game) -like 30 minutes ago.

?comprende? -futbol americano, no es futbol.

I was kidding- watched part of the game… footballs not my thing… well… sports in genral arnt my thing
(tu hablas espanol?)

iSI! pero, un poco…

-oh, yeah… missed teh jk

whoa i got a pretty reaction that i didn’t think i’d get

hey thanks i juss wanted to model a body somehow but i started on the head and when i ment gay i ment yes stupid

hehe
yeah i tried to get the cubish look on the head away but the lines wouldnt go coz of the knife cuts i did
and yes before i rendered this i thought why did i put the feet like that and i was too lazy to fix it lol ^^

hey thanks

See you should be careful with using gay as a word for stupid. It offends people, and plus he isn’t dressed well enough to be gay. And you need to give him a fancy hair cut too you know.

lol yeah i guess i should keep an eye out on my words

lol but why would i model a homosexual dude ?

^^

smanehack, do the community a favour and edit the posts title, you’ve been lucky this post has gone flameless.
As far as model crits, it looks like a good overall job, obviously some issues about the physical possibilities of that stance. i think you might need to spend more time getting that head shaped up, maybe use some ref. pictures. or if your going for cartoony i’d exagerate everything a little more, lots of scaling and disporportioned parts.