I was going to post this in Finished Projects, but the more I wathc it the more I realize, it’s not finished. It’s definately missing something, but I’m not sure where to go with it. so C&Cs are definately welcome.
Without anything else going on, the rotation of the logo and the text fade-in effects are simply too slow. I lose interest after about 3 seconds. Now, granted, I’m watching it without sound, so maybe I’m missing something there. However, it should be visually strong enough to retain interest even without sound. I would also recommend adjusting your logo’s material or world material. The light reflections on the move are kind of sore spots for the entire animation and the value of the background and the object are similar enough that it prevents the logo from really jumping out at you like it probably should.
Just a few notes. Hopefully you find them helpful.