Cool looking a lot better.
Here I simplified the toon settings:
First select one of the meshes and hit F5 to change the material
1: Set your preview to spherical
2: Change both of your shaders to “toon”
3: Size up the top shader
4: Size down the bottom shader

Just play around with different settings see what effeects you can get. Also Moving your light source around makes a difference.
Also, to make your image show up directly on your post, use this code : [>img]http://www.image.com/image.jpg[>/img] (but without those > signs, just put them there so the code wouldnt dissapear)