Ready for the Outdoors

Artwork Works in Progress
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well, I’ve put probably around 3-4 hours into this project. It started because I was trying to make a battery, and i’m going to add more items to the scene. So please note this project isn’t near done.

I have to put a new floor/table texture and fix all the materials. please give my ideas

http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/5533/camp6qp.jpg

2

Almost photo realistic! nice, Batterys are way to shiny.

3

Yep, very nice.
Just two points to note…

  1. as LoonieToon mentioned, the batteries are a bit too reflective
  2. You might want to change the material of the knife handle to something with less relfection, as I am assuming it is supposed to be made of either rubber or plastic.
    Apart from that, nice work.
4

You might want to change your overall source of light, 1. to a dimmer light so the flashlight can make a stronger imprssion with its light and 2. it will make the wood surface look more realistic and take excess reflection off your shiney materials.

5

batteries are very nice…

6

ok! I finally have an update, sorry about it, i’ve been busy and had no time to work on this project. So i worked on this a little last night, here’s the latest render:

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/2132/deardaddy5zv.jpg

  • I still need to get my table texture, and those batteries WILL be fixed next render. aghh… and i need to work on the note
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That flashlight is really small… I think it would be better if it was longer, so that you could fit 2 AA batteries in it. Right now, it only looks like 1 could fit inside.