Rob - The boy who found the way to heaven

Okay here he is, Rob. I just made him to test some hair stuff…and then I got the idea. A boy who finds the way to heaven… So here he are… (I am going put bones in him), what could be done better?

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First crit . . . the whites of his eyes are too reflective. They look like mirrors.

Second . . . he’d probably appreciate having a crotch. :slight_smile:

I realize that the proportions are exagerated (cartoonish), but maybe adjust the model to indicate that he does have a torso connecting those limbs.

Overall, it looks good though. Hope to see it lit/textured & animated!

“The boy who found the way to heaven?” Umm, right now I don’t see that (very interesting) story. I see a figure standing under a field of stars. Who’s he looking at? Why? What sort of a character is he? If he “found the way to heaven,” do I see (without words) how that has affected him? And so on.

Looks to me like he found his way to heaven by hitting the windshield of a flying truck… :smiley:

It also looks like a fun project. Look forward to seeing your improvement with particles.

The baground whas just made, to have one… There will be clouds an so on.
And I will work on the things you have said… :Z

And yes, it is meant to be cartoonish, but I ain’t so good at making humans anyway… :frowning:

Better?

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