Hello Blender Community,
This is a video to start off my Vimeo page. I was inspired to do this by Andrew Price’s
“How to Raise Your Profile as an Artist”.
I’m looking for critiques or comments of any kind.
Hi, great job and very good idea.
My main concern is that I had to watch the video 4 times before I could understand what the character was doing when he sped up. At first, I did not see the garbage disappearing.
I think it goes too fast or maybe you should add a moment where the character watches the garbage and decides to clean it up. (easier to write than to animate imho)
Hi danield. Quite nice. I would post in Finished Projects if you haven’t already done so.
@dacar- Thank you for the feedback. I tend to agree that something could be done to bring more attention to the task at hand. I’m leaning towards the idea that if he reacts disgusted to the garbage, it will help. Glad you liked it.
@3dementia- I will do that right away. Thank you for the suggestion.