Robot Animation

Hello. I will be making an animation of this robot throughout the next few weeks, but was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on what I have made so far. Please make suggestionsas to what I should change/not change for the main character so far. He will move with a combination of the fan on his back and the treads on his feet. Also, the miniguns are animated to “fold” out of the body. Hope you like it!

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Looks pretty good. The one thing I have to say is that it is TOO PERFECT. You will never have a clean object like that. Maybe add some bump mapping and add some texture… it gives the work character. The computer wants to spit a perfect image back at you… but it’s the artist’s job to sell the image by bringing real life qualities into it.

Secondly, maybe you would like to add a glow or lens flare of some sort on the lights of the robot… gives it a nice touch!

That’s my two cents.

  • Lostinspace

Thanks, but something really sad happened. The file crashed because I was using alpha 1 and my computer doesn’t like that i guess. Well, long story short, I’m trying to rebuild the scene and cant seem to find the same settings I had. I’m sure it will be better when I am done though. Thanks for the feedback though.

okay I remodeled almost everything, and put it in a more lighted setting.

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first render of the movie

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